There is ALOT going on with that ship. Except. It screams pure authority. I could see this in halo as a pheonix class sized ship. like a step down from the infinity. Not in a bad way though. More like you'll find this in the center of a battle group with an admiral on board kind of way.
Getting better and better each time . Really good! Try adding some larger decals/ paint sections to break it up even more. I see you have the different segments shaded slightly differently which is fine, but a larger color scheme/ camouflage thing would tie it together nicely. A good example is the ships found in Homeworld [link][link][link][link] you can see how they use the paint scheme to define large sections and tie it all together. You could actually paint right on top of this in fact, using this base would be perfect and I think it would look really sexy if you did .
Really good work man... you are getting very good very fast!